Friday, June 11, 2010

Then he proposed her

Then he proposed her.....









He asked her whether she can live without him , with some masked words to cover up his real intentions.

she replied ,"NO".

She also added she can't even imagine it.

Then he proposed her.........

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He was desperately searching for them, the answers for all those questions.

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Things were never the same after that , a period of metamorphosis occurred in him without his knowledge. he developed a strange feeling for her, you can even call it as fear.

fear???? yes!!!!

Fear of losing her.but he is not sure not about her, what is she thinking??? is the the same way he feels for her?is she thinking that he is as important as he thinks about her for his life?

One day he decided , he cannot take it anymore... he decided to ask her and he did.

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On the way back she uttered a nine word sentence, that changed the entire perspective of the relation completely. something happened at that time. they were no more friends from that point , that beautiful friendship they shared till that point was completely lost.


they were not foes either!

sorry i forgot, she said this,"I have never been so close with a boy". though this sentence is nothing new , it is one of the most cliched type of one liners exchanged universally between couples all over the world, it sounded very special for him on that day.

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None of the questions seemed familiar to him!! it was some run of the mill so called' fun competition'. he asked for help from every known face he knew.
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They sat in opposite seats in the transportation vehicle, had a few giggles at some jokes.reached their destination, she wetted her feet in that sodium chloride rich water from that giant water body. he was observing her motionless,

lucky water???

his answer at that time,"funny question, why should it be?"
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"well, may be yes!!!!"

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Can mere texts and words exchanged at a regular basis can help exchange ones soul???he didn't think so, "ain't that phenomenon grand???"he asked himself. but the real answer is , yes it is grand but it is not in the definition of what we call grand!

something happened in him, but he never knew it.


suddenly one day she asked her out, as friends, just as friends....

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the sun was beating down very hard,he couldn't help it.none seemed to get him out of this mess he got himself to.

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He use to watch lots of movies and read lots of books. those included many stories with plots where a the whole life of a the protagonist is changed completely with small things some times even 'words'.

But he never expected a single 'hi' would change his world completely.

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That gift made him active in the world of online chatting . online chatting are nothing new, they originated in the late 90s and attained their peak of popularity in the early 2000s.he has received so many hi's and bye's and that one was nothing different, it read like this,

her:hi

with a 'blimp' notification sound it popped out in his PC.

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One day he received a virtual gift from her, he opened it, only to discover that it is a cheap work by some website to popularize their content.

Next day she thanked him for the gift he sent!!!

??????????????????????????????????????

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He was walking this time , alone as usual. their paths in which they travel with equal magnitude and different directions when viewed in a two dimensional coordinate met near the building where a special kind of worms reside.after having a brief chat he asked her for those 'unimportant things' which she has to deliver to him by the virtue of her position. she told that she'll send all those things through the electronic media and got his e-mail ID.

the next day he had a glimpse of her e-mail ID.

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At that time he had the first glimpse of her and like any other person he asked her help involuntarily, it is a bit strange because they had only a couple of eye-eye contacts before to their credit.

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In another hot summer day they exchanged a smile from a distance, both should have felt a bit special about each other. he then gained some knowledge about her, from the people around.......

-Rajarajan


(the narration style i have adopted in this story is highly inspired by the movie 'Memento' christopher Nolan)

3 comments:

Unknown said...

a wonderful story by my frien....... a different way of narration!!!! three cheers for u rajarajan !!!!

A.Vanishree (vandhu's sister) said...

very beautiful story man. good vocabulary. makes everyone to think about their love life.

good job keep doing.

ammukutty said...

u always rock rajarajan.........:-)
great........
it is a very beautiful story and it has to be as it is 4m ur heart....